Each
morning I wrote my name
on
the dusty cabinet, then crossed
the
dining room table in script, scrawled
in
capitals on the backs of chairs,
practicing
signatures like scales
A picture of Julia Alvarez~ |
while
Mother followed, squirting
linseed
from a burping can
into
a crumpled-up flannel.
She
erased my fingerprints
from
the bookshelf and rocker,
polished
mirrors on the desk
scribbled
with my alphabets.
My
name was swallowed in the towel
with
which she jeweled the table tops.
The
grain surfaced in the oak
and
the pine grew luminous.
But
I refused with every mark
to
be like her, anonymous.
Dare to analyse it:
In
this poem, the persona clearly specifies her difference in character
compared to her mother. “practicing signatures like scales”
reflects the persona as an artistic and elegant individual which
contrast the idea of her mother “followed, squirting linseed from a
burping can into a crumpled-up flannel” which reflects her mother
as a rather different style from her elegant impression. Therefore,
stanza one reflects the artistic yet elegant persona’s difference
from her mother, who really has no connection with her daughter’s
way and style of life.
In
the next stanza, “She erased my fingerprints from the bookshelf and
rocker” and “But I refused with every mark to be like her,
anonymous”. These suggests the way that the persona thinks of her
mother, as someone that is “anonymous”, unknown to the world,
transparent to people, and is firm that she does not want to end up
like her mother, she wants to leave deep impressions on people and
not be “anonymous” like her mother, be recognised by people.
This
poem gets us to think about how the young us thinks and how we think
nowadays. When we were young, we were almost not afraid to try on
anything, and have dreams as wild and unique as possible. But as we
grew, we started to understand the society and care about our image
thus a lot of things we did not try for fear that will ruin our
reputation or think that some things are just impossible to achieve.
If we had the courage and ignorance of the young us, will the world,
the society be a better place then?
I liked the start very much! You very quickly presented how the daughter contrasts herself against her mother and seems to want nothing in association with her mother. Good!
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